Monday, 28 March 2011

Second Attempt - Lorenzo's verdict.

After the adjustments Lorraine Suggested we then wanted to get another designers thoughts how the presentation was present, mainly asking for advice for the first page as we needed to have some impact to get the judges attention. Lorenzo suggested the first page should show the concept being used, maybe scanning a code off a t-shirt, but a nice, clean big image to grab their attention to read more. (Plus a few adjustments to the other pages)

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